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Authored by jhb on Thu, Dec 26, 8:12 PM.
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Summary
  • Use consistent language to describe user values unchanged by the kernel.
  • Replace passive language with active in a few places.
  • Add a history note for kqueuex().
  • Various wording and markup tweaks.

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jhb requested review of this revision.Thu, Dec 26, 8:12 PM

OK, one little note.

lib/libsys/kqueue.2
116

The "also" here seems somewhat out of place to me for some reason but I'm not quite sure why. Maybe "Also, for compatibility with NetBSD the..." or "The kqueue1 function is also provided, for compatibility with NetBSD. It accepts..."

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Sat, Dec 28, 5:19 PM
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