Differential D48203

kqueue.2: Editorial pass
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Authored by jhb on Thu, Dec 26, 8:12 PM.

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rG9b1585384d53: kqueue.2: Editorial pass

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Use consistent language to describe user values unchanged by the kernel.

Replace passive language with active in a few places.

Add a history note for kqueuex().

Various wording and markup tweaks.

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jhb created this revision.Thu, Dec 26, 8:12 PM

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Harbormaster completed remote builds in B61336: Diff 148406.Thu, Dec 26, 8:12 PM

OK, one little note.

lib/libsys/kqueue.2
115–116	The "also" here seems somewhat out of place to me for some reason but I'm not quite sure why. Maybe "Also, for compatibility with NetBSD the..." or "The kqueue1 function is also provided, for compatibility with NetBSD. It accepts..."

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Sat, Dec 28, 5:19 PM

Tweak kqueue1 language

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Harbormaster completed remote builds in B61406: Diff 148553.Mon, Dec 30, 3:51 PM

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Closed by commit rG9b1585384d53: kqueue.2: Editorial pass (authored by jhb). · Explain WhyMon, Dec 30, 7:10 PM

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