Differential D28724

Update manpage for AMD 10GbE driver
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Authored by rajeshasp on Feb 17 2021, 4:21 AM.

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rG2845cb445f76: Update manpage for AMD 10GbE driver
rGec786886661a: Update manpage for AMD 10GbE driver

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Removed the description above removed sysctl "single_fl"
Added the description for sysctl "link_workaround"

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Verified no warnings with igor and mandoc

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rajeshasp created this revision.Feb 17 2021, 4:21 AM

Herald added a reviewer: manpages. · View Herald TranscriptFeb 17 2021, 4:21 AM

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rajeshasp requested review of this revision.Feb 17 2021, 4:21 AM

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B37083: Diff 84063.Feb 17 2021, 4:21 AM

rajeshasp added reviewers: vmaffione, gallatin.Feb 17 2021, 4:22 AM

yuripv added a subscriber: yuripv.Feb 17 2021, 8:39 AM

yuripv added inline comments.

share/man/man4/axp.4
150	This should be documented in LOADER TUNABLES section then.
155–156
161–162
161–162	This sentence should be first in description.
161–162	This seems to be redundant and stating obvious.
161–162
170	Let's name it consistently.
173	It was already said that it is workaround.

It may also help to use these commands (available on freefall) to look for style issues

$ mandoc -Tlint manpage.8
$ igor manpage.8

@vmaffione, I have used igor and mandoc to ensure no warnings before submitting the patch. I have informed the same in Test plan section

share/man/man4/axp.4
150	Added LOADER TUNABLES section and moved this variable there.
161–162	Removed these two lines.

Addressed review comments on v1 patch

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B37151: Diff 84182.Feb 18 2021, 7:32 AM

gallatin added inline comments.Feb 18 2021, 2:58 PM

share/man/man4/axp.4
167–168	I would rephrase to remove the word "test". Perhaps something like "To use netmap with this device, split header support must be disabled (set this variable to 0)"

Addressed comments on V2 patch

Harbormaster completed remote builds in B37174: Diff 84238.Feb 19 2021, 4:06 AM

@vmaffione, @gallatin and @yuripv,

Comments so far has been addressed. Please let me know if there are any other comments.

vmaffione accepted this revision.Feb 19 2021, 7:02 AM

This revision is now accepted and ready to land.Feb 19 2021, 7:02 AM

gallatin accepted this revision.Feb 19 2021, 2:49 PM

Also LGTM from manpages.

Thanks everyone for accepting the changes.

Closed by commit rGec786886661a: Update manpage for AMD 10GbE driver (authored by rajeshasp). · Explain WhyFeb 24 2021, 5:04 AM

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rajeshasp added a commit: rGec786886661a: Update manpage for AMD 10GbE driver.

rajeshasp added a commit: rG2845cb445f76: Update manpage for AMD 10GbE driver.Mar 3 2021, 6:59 PM

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