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bz requested review of this revision.Dec 31 2024, 11:45 PM

Thanks for the report! Some suggestions from my side...

website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/lkpi-wireless.adoc
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I believe, there's supposed to be a plus (+) at the end of the line?

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might be mistaken - I believe, there's a comma missing between "ongoing" and "this"

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Suggest rewording into separate sentences, i.e.
Previously, drivers were committed to FreeBSD src.git; they have now been retroactively imported into vendor branches and merged to main.

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might be missing a comma here?

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should this be "a half" instead of "an half"?

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assume this means "unnoticed"?

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I assume there should be a comma before "which" and one before "received"?

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(g) is missing in beginning

bz marked 8 inline comments as done.

Incorporate feedback and reword some bits slightly.

website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/lkpi-wireless.adoc
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I reworded it a bit differently. See if this is better.

pauamma_gundo.com added inline comments.
website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/lkpi-wireless.adoc
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s/works/tasks/ maybe? Otherwise clarify.

website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/lkpi-wireless.adoc
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bz marked 3 inline comments as done.

Address more feedback.

OK, let's get it into the tree.

website/content/en/status/report-2024-10-2024-12/lkpi-wireless.adoc
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Spelling.

bz marked an inline comment as done.Jan 7 2025, 8:09 PM
This revision was not accepted when it landed; it landed in state Needs Review.Jan 9 2025, 10:59 AM
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