Copyedit zirias' pre*/post* update.

[pauamma_gundo.com]

Summary

While there, wordsmith a bit more of those sections.

Test Plan

igor documentation/content/en/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/_index.adoc
make all
lynx # eyeball that section

[grahamperrin]

documentation/content/en/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/_index.adoc

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[pauamma_gundo.com]

Waiting for review from ports people before I update.

[pauamma_gundo.com]

Address comments by bapt and grahamperrin.

[pauamma_gundo.com]

documentation/content/en/books/porters-handbook/pkg-files/_index.adoc

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Used with a small further wording tweak.

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Went in a different direction.

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Used with a small further wording tweak.

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Went in a different direction (including making this deinstall-specific).

[pauamma_gundo.com]

Wait, no change? Hold on, something's not right.

[grahamperrin]

In D36770#840431, @pauamma wrote:

Wait, no change? …

If it helps: I do see one change between diffs 1 and 2 (ids 111121 and 111823): the spelling correction at line 102.

[pauamma_gundo.com]

hanges following reviews by bapt and grahamperrin

[pauamma_gundo.com]

In D36770#840432, @grahamperrin wrote:

In D36770#840431, @pauamma wrote:

Wait, no change? …

If it helps: I do see one change between diffs 1 and 2 (ids 111121 and 111823): the spelling correction at line 102.

There should have been more than that, but I think I got it this time. Have at it!

[grahamperrin]

In D36770#840436, @pauamma wrote:

… Have at it!

Thanks, the changes look good.

(Beyond that: I don't know the technologies, and can't visualise how the rendered page will appear.)

[pauamma_gundo.com]

*ping* SME reviewers and mentors

[pauamma_gundo.com]

Address bcr's comments made in D36769

[bcr]

Looks good to me now. I'm approving this one and https://reviews.freebsd.org/D36769. Thanks!