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It's a good start, thanks.
I added few language corrections and simplifications.
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59 | s/In doubt/When in doubt/ Also, to have fewer commas, maybe write: When in doubt, research the company on the Internet or the software's website in addition to the ... | |
64 | Maybe: ... provides a template to cite...? | |
84 | s/trademarks/trademark/ | |
95 | s/can make the maintenance of the trademarks/can maintain the trademarks/ |
documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/trademarks/_index.adoc | ||
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56 | We should use ™ and ® where necessary (via AsciiDoc escapes, if applicable), not (TM) or (R). And drop "at least", we do not need to use the symbol on every instance of the trademark. If we need it at all, using it on the first is sufficient. For reference, the Linux Foundation's request is (https://www.linuxfoundation.org/the-linux-mark/):
Note that this is a request, and it matches our current practice but is probably not necessary. So above I would write "it is customary to cite..." |
documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/trademarks/_index.adoc | ||
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64 | I would say "provides a template for citing trademarks to avoid duplicating trademark information in each document" | |
66 | Maybe: First, check the project's template for the trademark. If there is not an existing entry for the trademark, add a new one. Second, add the trademark to the `trademarks` tag in the `Front Matter` section at the top of the document. Possibly s/top/start/ or s/top/beginning/ | |
95 | Perhaps s/maintain/update/? |
documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/trademarks/_index.adoc | ||
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56 | Thanks for the feedback and information. (TM) or (R) renders as ™ and ®. Do you think an example like this from Linux can be useful? |
No objection from me, we can always iterate on it in the tree if anything new comes up